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Friday, 1 May 2020

This week I have been trying to make a movie script this is what I have done.
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  1. Mr Terry Mitchell6 May 2020 at 20:18

    Hi Kian
    Sorry for taking so long to get back to you with feedback on your writing planning.
    You've made a really good start on this - that is an amazing list of synonyms. My favourites were "evil warlord" and "anti-hero". I also liked "Kong King" (instead of King Kong) and "Zilla God" (instead of God Zilla).
    I think you should move the events in box 4 (slide 16) and put it in the Resolution box (slide 17), because it is actually the resolution. What you have in the resolution box is more an epilogue. Google epilogue if you don't know what that means.
    I look forward to reading your finished story. Keep it up!
    - Mr Mitchell

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