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Friday 23 March 2018

 we  have been learning  about food for  thought we have also been learning about what is healthy and whats not healthy for you and we even went to the supermarket and read the labels on the back of the packet and we got a lunchbox and a big magnet and some parent helpers even took us back to school .































































































































                                                                                                                                                                                                                  










































































                                                                                                                                                                                                     
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7 comments:

  1. Kareem9 May 2018 at 11:46

    Kia Ora,
    I liked the way you explained this post. You could add more full stops, add a title, or maybe remake the post because it might have glitched out. There is a big space at the end, that might be why you have a glitched post. Next time you could look back on your posts and see what you need to improve. Do you remember the order in which the classes in Te Ara Takitini go in?

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    1. Kareem9 May 2018 at 12:15

      Kia Ora,
      I liked the way you explained this post. You could add more full stops, add a title, or maybe remake the post because it might have glitched out. There is a big space at the end, that might be why you have a glitched post. Next time you could look back on your posts and see what you need to improve. Do you remember the order in which the classes in Te Ara Takitini go in?

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  2. Anonymous23 May 2018 at 12:16

    Hello its noah from ya school i think you should try not to full the blog post that LONG! thats allbye

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  3. Anonymous30 May 2018 at 09:57

    Kia Ora Kian This is great work, Maybe you could add a full stop after We have been learning about food for thought. Also add a CAPITAL for W but anyway great job. I think you should go back and edit it because there is a lot of blank space at the bottom. Did you like food for thought? I did.
    Well great job that's all from me bye.

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  4. Anonymous30 May 2018 at 10:11

    Hello Mikayla here I like you slide did you now that up and go is made out of weat bit. you need same full stop so people know when to stop. From Mikayla

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  5. Anonymous30 May 2018 at 10:15

    Kia ora Kian, Zoey here from Whakamanawa!
    I love how you said that we went to the SuperMarket to look at the labels on the foods and see whether it is healthy or unhealthy! You did a great job on writing the short story. You reminded me that we even went and did that. Maybe next time you could use less ands and use more full stops and punctuation. Maybe next you could also make the story a bit longer and not make that big space. If there were photos there I couldn't see them so to me it just looks like it's a big space so please fix that sometime soon.
    Blog U Later! :3

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  6. Anonymous30 May 2018 at 10:15

    Talofa Lava Safiyya here.
    I love that you said what you did in the weekend!
    Next time you should make sure before you publish you can click view post and it will show you what it looks like when it's published. Also Remember to get a buddy to check for punctuation needed.
    Bye for now.

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